I think this is really, really cool! I love The Raven, by Edgar Allan Poe, and think it fits this style of writing brilliantly. I enjoyed doing this and probably will try some more--after all, Poe wrote an awful lot of poems. Of course, Jessica Sprague is a genius and her sample looks a whole lot better than my piece of work, but practice will improve my next try.
I must try to relax more when holding the pen. I had to pry my fingers from it!